Coldstone Chronicles: The Fall of the Nervii: The Gathering (Chapter Two, Redux)

It's been a while since I posted a new part of the story, and since this has been written for a while now, I thought I'd share it. I'm currently still writing 'the Gathering' - I've just finished sketching out chapters four and five, so I thought that people might like to have a read of chapter two. This isn't quite as much of a first draft as the other two sections - as I rewrote the 'battle' scene at least three times, and am still not perfectly satisfied with it..... ah well. Hope you like it!


The Gathering