express your opinions

It's very difficult to create something that other people are gonna like. For instance you can get together with some friends and make something that you think is really great and funny, and entertaining. Yet when other people look at, because they haven't been involved in the creative process, they are unable find anything special about it at all.

No matter what your creating, be it drama skits, or artworks, or films, or even Escape Velocity Nova plugs this big rule applies: people might not like what your making.

My TC, which suprisingly is comming along quite well, needs a reviewing, people need to tell me what they think about what I'm doing, so I can see if what i'm doing is worthwhile, and so I can get some constructive criticism and make what I'm doing better and more appealing to other people.

So check out this link (its here and below): (url="http://"http://3114.spyw.com")3114: A Nova TC(/url), and tell me what you think.

I have recieved some criticism and compliments from various people, and although however few, they do help alot.

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it looks quite cool. I hope there are more ships then the one you put up but I'm assuming they're just the ones you have made so far. That aside it looks very nice. Those planet graphics are great stuff. Very impressive.
If you want any help with programming then e-mail me at Starbridge42@hotmail.com or reply to this message.

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(This message has been edited by Starbridge42 (edited 03-27-2003).)

You might want to try proofreading your story and chronology. Free word advice: astronaut does not contain any "g"s or "h"s.

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Originally posted by Russell Quintero:
You might want to try proofreading your story and chronology. Free word advice: astronaut does not contain any "g"s or "h"s.

Well maybe not the way YOU spell astronaught 🙂

Last time I actually went through the site I thought it was quite intriguing.

(edit) Just as an afterthought, and I doubt you would, but don't base what you do with your plug with what people say here. You might get a good response and get some helpful criticism, or you might not. Regardless, I think all of us here would agree that the more TC's the better and would encourage you to keep pluggin away. If you like the idea, chances are you're not the only one.

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(This message has been edited by Kame (edited 03-27-2003).)

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Originally posted by Kame:
**(edit) Just as an afterthought, and I doubt you would, but don't base what you do with your plug with what people say here. You might get a good response and get some helpful criticism, or you might not. Regardless, I think all of us here would agree that the more TC's the better and would encourage you to keep pluggin away. If you like the idea, chances are you're not the only one.

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Very important point. Which is why I just commented on proofreading, an all too often overlooked part of development.

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Looks nice. Can't wait to see it released!

I'm glad you're not being squeemish about terrorism. I'm sure a lot of people are starting to look at terrorism as middle-eastern Muslims killing Americans for no reason.

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Yeah, proof reading is very important, and I had a great deal of trouble spelling astranaut (is that how it is spelt) - the damned spell checker couldn't figure it out either.

I want to make the plugin have various connections with things that are going on in the world today - such as the war with Iraq, and terrorism. I think if people can relate to various events in the plugs story it would be much better.

Thanks for your advice and help.

Starbridge42 would you be interested in proof reading.

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Originally posted by thedecline:
Yeah, proof reading is very important, and I had a great deal of trouble spelling astranaut (is that how it is spelt)

It's spelled "astronaut." It sounds like you have a very good story going, and your work is coming along well. If you want, I can proofread and critique story-lines.

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