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I heard something from behind me. Whichever way behind me is. And besides, I didn't need to turn around, I saw it was a lizard even when I didn't look at it. This manifestation of myself was quite an expeirience. It had shocked me for a moment when I first became this new being after I had died. It all came swirling back to me later on. When I chalenged the Red Goblin, and accepted. I still remember the great attack on my palace. The highest ranking Tyr'Zhak generals stormed my throne room, wordlessly seizing me and shooting me off to a far-away moon. They had found out about my ill-fated chalenge. I died.
No matter... what I had to do now was to stop the thing-which was my own brother-from trying to avenge someone that betrayed him.
You see, this whole mess with the big terror of the universe, stretches back before the "rest" of the universe even exsisted. That Old Mayan Legend was-and is- a a far cry of what things realy are. This is the story of three brothers. And I was one of them.
Before the universe existed, there was the Great Star. Now, the Great Star fathered three children. The firstborn was a mighty and powerful creature that was more powerful than anything in existence, other then the Great Star itself. He would be called among humans, a "dragon". The secondborn was less in power. Much less. But still, he could enhance his power by technilogical advancments. Which he was given as gifts by the Great Star. It gave him a starfighter. One that was amazingly quick, fast striking, and could go anywhere in the universe-or at least the part of the universe that was there at the time. The secondborn, was me. The thirdborn-oh, I don't remember what he looked like. All I know was that he was even less powerful than me. He was an animal: a dinosaur. The dinosaur that eventually spawned all other dinosaurs that were in exsistence. As I eventually was the father of the Tyr'Zhak, but I am geting ahead of myself.
Now, the third brother was evil from the start. He was jealouse of the firstborn brother, and so he commited a crime against the Great Star, making it look like it was the firstborns fault.
It was a terrible injustice...
The mighty first brother was cast off to earth, which was at the time in its mideiveil stage. The earth's inhabitants were hostile toward him, and then killed him and all his descendents-dragons.
After a great many years, the third brother died from old age. His bones and all his descendents (dinosaurs) were burried in secret on earth.
I myself, the secondborn, lived a long life and gave birth to my own race. Which I'm sure you know by now.
The Great Star was old, and eventualy died in peace. He missed his firstborn, even though he did know that he had done the right thing. Only was it thirty years after his death did I realize the crime my younger brother had commited. I vowed one day to seek out my older brothers' spirit, telling him what realy happened. But I could only do that when I was in spirit. Only then would I be able to find him.
But then, of course came the unwise creators who re-created the unjust brother. When they had died the second time, my brother felt it because he was in spirit at the time when they had died. He wanted to take revenge on humans for reviving his brother-only to kill him again.
Since then he has been plotting to destroy all human life. No matter where it is. I had to stop him and tell him that he would be avenging someone who betrayed him.
And so now, I was searching for old data files in InGen's records on Isla Sorna that would show what my younger brother looked like. I don't remember what he was realy like, only that he betrayed my older brother.
{Now you guys can add onto this. But keep this kinda serious, I don't want to ruin the story}
{I also think that the ending of this story would be the climax of this whole post. I think the time to end this post in general will be coming soon.}
As he looked through the files of InGen, he finally found his brother. He was the worst and most horrible of them all. He was the hunter/scavenger that would puzzle scintists for centuries. There are no real footprints of him. There are just mysterious bones with horrible teeth. He was pronounced king of the dinosaurs for a reason though. He was... the T-Rex!
(duh, duh, dah)
------------------ Feel the Jive ------------------ "My son is not a Communist! He may be a liar, a bum, a Communist, but he is not a porn-star!" -Abraham Simpson ------------------
(In these next few posts, I am giving the 73rd dimension some background).
The Grand Emperor of the 73rd dimension, the creator of good, the destroyer of evil, Joseph felt a tremor in the space-time continuum. These things happen all the time, he told himself...
It had been over 15 millennia since Joseph was whisked away from Earth (he was a neanderthal), named, and made powerful by the Old Ones. The Old Ones (a bunch of guys, basis of almost all religion in the universe) created everything that has been, is, and will be. Their official policy for permanently inhabiting dimensions is to take a being from a reasonably primitive planet and turn him/her into a god, more or less. Then, the newly-created god would make planets, and populate them. As of about the year 2800 (Earth's Gregorian Calendar) one of their first prodigys, Joseph, became the most powerful of the "gods." Ever since, Joseph has grown in power, while the Old Ones seem to diminish. Joseph has vowed to carry on the mission of the Old Ones: to promote peace and happiness in the universe...
...still the tremor was like nothing Joseph had ever felt. Using his great power, he traveled to the center of the Universe. What Joseph saw appalled him. The Old Ones had taken on corporeal (flesh/blood) bodies, and apparently died peacefully. Joseph felt another tremor in the continuum; this time it was from about the Earth year 1996, on some small island off the coast of what is/was called Costa Rica. Joseph had a powerful feeling inside of him, compelling him to investigate the possible connection between the death of the Old Ones, and a power that rivals that of Joseph himself apparently residing on a tropical island in the Atlantic sea...
------------------ "U.E.S. Iron Fist, request permission to dock." "Permission denied." "Up yours, Voinian scum!"
(This message has been edited by Iron Fist (edited 06-25-2000).)
Tyraih Zhaik (or whatever his name is) shudderes as he thinks of what he has to go up against. A T-Rex. He is prepared though and will take on his brother with full force.
Meanwhile, Joseph decides to see what the disturbance is on Earth. He takes a deep breath and heads towards the small park called Jurrasic Park...
D.A.R.K. is overcome with problems. They soon receive word of reinforcements though and fight on strongly...
suddenly whurp realizes that the story is getting too serious, and diverts course to destroy whoever started that thing about the inca's...after making everyone understand that the story needs to be wacked out and freaky again, he heads to the 6th dimension to help D.A.R.K.
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As Ubermann arrives at the source of the odd feeling, he sees his first mate's escape pod! He brings the pod inside the ship and finds nothing inside except a small note. It says "I am sorry about your crew member, but unless you give us the secret of how to manufacture a black hole, you will never see him or your home planet again! You will never know who said this. I will remain a mystery to the end of time. -Kitrias
Elsewhere in the 6th dimension...
Kitrias, the captain of the U.A.S. Merlot, plots a course for D.A.R.K. headquarters. With the crewman of the cowardly Cuisine safely confined to the brig and the message in the escape pod, Kitrias was sure he would soon have the plans for making holes. With that in mind, he went to the D.A.R.K. recruting office and signed up. He immediately got told there was a large battle in the process, so he set off to help...
------------------ Oh no! It's locked!-Harry Damn it Pam, stop glowing-Harry Eat staples electro-breath-Harry
What do you call it if a blonde dyes her hair brown? Artificial Intelligence
Some people need to wash their gene pool
A.S.S Cuisine reporting for duty!
(This message has been edited by Ubermann (edited 06-25-2000).)
Welcome to Terminal 14... History of 73rd Dimension Accessing...
History of the 73rd Dimension: Over 15 millennia ago the Old Ones, the wisest and most powerful beings ever to have existed, created Joseph. Joseph, the Grand Emperor of the 73rd dimension, used his incredible powers to create this lone world, Peregrin. On it, Joseph created the most wonderful plants, animals, golf courses, and strip clubs in the known universe. When the planet building was complete and the first people were created, Joseph proclaimed that Peregrin will forever be the bastion of peace for this and many other dimensions. The people of Peregrin worked for all of these years creating a model society, devoted to peace and harmony. When disturbances in the space-time continuum warned Joseph of strife in other dimensions, Peregrin built an incredible navy in case the "renegades" of other dimensions learned of cross-dimensional travel. The flagship was named the U.E.S. Iron Fist. The largest and most powerful vessel to be built. It was sent to the sixth dimension, where rock star Elvis and his band of Smurfs resided, after encountering a large navy of bluish holes. After several hundred years of war, the U.E.S. Iron Fist became a living entity, its crew being absorbed. When the vessel first lived, it was bestowed powers from the sixth dimension, allowing the Iron Fist to do almost anything it wished. Later, it reincarnated a powerful figure known only as the Goldfish. The two entities bonded, and created the U.E.S. Iron Fish. There were many more hundreds, even thousands, of years of war. When the Robin of Rebirth was unleashed and the 4th dimension was safe again, the U.E.S. Iron Fish retired. In retirement, the vessel played golf and went to strip clubs. Another period of war erupted, and the U.E.S. Iron Fish was again called to battle. When the fighting had stopped, the powerful fish/ship created a lone Huge Fish-Shaped Orange Hole, dedicated to the defense of the free world. While the flagship of the Peregrin Navy was doing good deeds in another dimension, life on Peregrin itself changed little. Only recently has Joseph taken on a new problem, this time concerned with the fabric of space-time itself. No one, not even His Majesty Joseph, knows what will happen next.
End transmission.
Hey people, why don't you have a try at directing your talents towards writing stories about EV & EVO? I am the editor of the EV/EVO Chronicles at: (url="http://"http://www.AmbrosiaSW.com/games/ev/chronicles.html")www.AmbrosiaSW.com/games/ev/chronicles.html(/url)
When you have written your EV/EVO stories, go there and submit them (remember to proofread your work and put the title of the piece in the "subject" space). Within a few weeks, your story will be the "feature" on the Chronicles page for a few days, and then will remain in the chronicles archives for everyone to read and comment upon.
Hope to hear from you all soon. Jude PS--Any questions? E-mail me at: judelk@yahoo.com
hey jude, do use a favour...when this story finishes, or when someone closes the thread, copy and paste it into the ev chronicals (sp?) section.
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Originally posted by Whurp: **hey jude, do use a favour...when this story finishes, or when someone closes the thread, copy and paste it into the ev chronicals (sp?) section.
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Yeah, not that that's gonna happen soon ( ;)) but that would be sweet!
------------------ Feel the Jive ------------------ I'm not as think as you stupid I am. ------------------
When Joseph appeared on Isla Sorna, he saw a large, almost collapsing building. "Could this be the residence of this disturbance?" He walked into the building, and was almost hit with a falling piece of scaffolding. As Joseph walked along the corridor, he could hear rustling. He saw someone in a small room, going through files. The person did not notice Joseph as he watched intently. After a few minutes, the person must have found what he wanted - a picture of an animal. Joseph thought it looked like a creature from Earth, about 65 million years back. But why would this person want a picture of an extinct animal? Then, the person slowly faded away. Joseph could not believe his eyes! Where had the person gone? What just happened? Why didn't that guy have any pants on? Joseph felt another tremor in the space-time continuum. It came from a very distant planet in another dimension. Joseph was intrigued by the turn of events and decided to follow this creature...
who the hell is joseph?
Originally posted by Whurp: **who the hell is joseph? **
Man, have you been reading ANY of the posts???
Joseph is the immortal Grand Emperor of the 73rd Dimension. He's been hard at work for over 15000 years. If you don't know what the 73rd dimension is, it is the home of the U.E.S. Iron Fish. If you don't know what that is, read all of pages 5-7 on this topic!
Originally posted by Jive 320: **Yeah, not that that's gonna happen soon (;) ) but that would be sweet! **
One of you could submit it yourself. Break it up into smaller pieces, Put an paragraph at the beginning of each one, explaining that it is part of a "Tell a Story" post that originally appeared on the EVO board, and put the title in the subject line with Part 1, Part 2, etc. for each section. Jude
Originally posted by Jude: **One of you could submit it yourself. Break it up into smaller pieces, Put an paragraph at the beginning of each one, explaining that it is part of a "Tell a Story" post that originally appeared on the EVO board, and put the title in the subject line with Part 1, Part 2, etc. for each section. Jude **
Yeah, I might do that as well as cut out some of the non-story parts (such as sigs, small discusions etc..)..
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ok, this story is starting to suck. ever since the incas became involved with air sucking machines, the posts have gotten less and less whacked. whatever happened to the battle of the holes and the D.A.R.K.? whats up with you people!? get your sense of humor back!
Jeez, I forget what was happening to D.A.R.K. Let's see. Oh yeah...
The Turquoise Navy started unleashing powerful plasma rays at the large province. Hades finally unleashes his forces in all of their glory now equiped with the giant donut launchers. Hades quickly blows up about 11 holes when the A.S.S. Cuisine fired his mini-Homers. They ate any donut that came near the holes. They would then go over to the ships and unleash their devastating belches at them. Hades plan to give the holes indegestion blew up in his face. Litterally. Then a ray of hope. Pike and Ripper fold into the system with the Uzbekistan Commandoes! The commandoes quickly take out all mini-men and all mini-Homers. Hades and the rest of D.A.R.K. launch the giant donuts towards the holes. Ethal sets up the force field again while the U.E.S. Iron Fish launches his giant potatoe launcher!! The navy is quickly depleted and the rst scatter all over the universe. The A.S.S. Cuisine folds into the 73rd dimension looking for more goldfish. The U.E.S. disambarks after the A.S.S. Cuisine while saying so long and good luck. The commandoes settle down and sign up for D.A.R.K. Hades greets Pike and they congragulate on each others victory. Soon the origianal turquoise hole returns with the robin of rebirth and repairs any damage to the province. All is at peace for now...
I think people are getting confused. The dinosaur brother of SHRA'LIYA (The ArcMaster in his spirit form) are dead and the only brother left is also in spirit, which is a DRAGON not a dinosaur. But I will not stop this story just because of one mistake.
It was one of the descendents of the third brother. This dinosaur must have known that I was going to tell the first brother that the third betrayed him! And he wanted to stop me.
I do not quite know how I can exist in the physical and non-physical world at the same time, but I had the advantages, and disadvantages of both.
The large T-Rex charge his great bulk at me, sending broken glass, filling cabinets, and old desks my way. I jumped a great distance (about thirty feet) away from him and started running. He followed me, destroying all the lab files and tools in his path. I was running for the doors, but then jumped backwards and over the T-Rex, doing a summesault in the air and landing on the ground. My reflexes were quick enough for me to gash open the bottom of his foot with my hand claws, just as his foot passed over me while he was running. Falling down in pain from my surprise attack, the T-Rex slid on the ground for about ten feet over vines and sharp wood. He stood up but slipped and fell back down again, roaring. By this time I was running away from him and back the way I came.
The T-rex began to stand up again, and this time got his footing. He began to run again at me, but fell down again this time from a massive tremor that shook the ground. I almost fell too, but instead skid to a stop just to see the dinosaur behind me vanish.
Looking up into the night sky, I saw a pair of enormous wings flapping gracefully, lifting a huge reptilian like body in to the sky. It was him
My older brother. I could recognize him anyday. Apparently he had grabbed the mighty T-Rex and was just holding him in his huge, clawed hands. Looking at my own hands, his were similar to mine, but only a hundred times larger. I watched as he swooped down towards the ground with the T-Rex. It appeared he landed behind a torn-up building. I could only see his huge wings behind the building flapping strongly as he landed. He lifted back up, and I could see he did not have the T-Rex. He must have let him loose behind the building.
I reflected on what I had to do-tell my brother about how his most youngest sibling betrayed him. He was not going to be happy. Plus he had just picked up a T-Rex and set him down behind that building harmlessly. I watched as he came back my way, his long and slender body snaking through the air. As he began his descent just in front of me, I could see his face. It resembled mine slightly, the same type of hooked horns that came out from the back of his head, and the same long and pointed noise with forward facing nostrils. The only real two differences was that his rought-iron collored head was much longer and slender than mine (I was rather blunt-nosed with a color of steely gray) and that he had a big "neck frill" that folded against the skin of his neck. He would often half-open it to fan himsef slightly or open it all the way whenever he was angry or about to attack.
Another tremor shook the ground as he landed. He stared down at me with his bright green eyes with black slits as pupils. But it was a loving and playful stare. He was the great terror of the universe, but the two of us were brothers, and so we acted like brothers.
"Hey, whats up? I haven't seen your little Tyr'Zhakian figure for over two millenia." He said, slightly chuckling. "Ya, well, I haven't seen you for a long time either." I replied. My brother slithered his body backward and then lowered his massive head right down in front of me (if he didn't move backwards his long neck would have squished me). "Listen," I began "I have to tell you something." But he interjected me. "What? That my neck frill has grown five feet?" He asked, smiling (which reveiled quite a big row of his foot long fangs). His interuption made me pause and look at his frill. It had grown quite a bit. "It did grow." I said, surprised. He rippled the frill a bit, showing off its texture (his neck frill was like a human's brand new goatee). I walked over to it, seeing how nice it looked. "It looks good." I comented. "It does doesn't it." He said, rippling it again. "Listen," I began again solenmly, "I need to-" but I was inturrupted by him again. "Oh MAN I'm thirsty." He lifted his huge head off the ground and got in a position for take off, rearing his wings. "I'll be back in a second bro. Just gonna get a drink of water." He said as he lifted off, heading towards the jungle. He was gonna find a lake or river to drink from.
I watched as he lifted off into the sky, wondering how I was gonna break the news to him about his betrayal.