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The End of the Order
We need to get the kid a grammar check...
------------------ World War 1 was fought with Machine Guns and Cannons. World War 2 was fought with bombs and missiles. I don't know what World War 3 will be fought with, but it will be so terrible that World War 4 will be fought with stone clubs. Steven Hawkings, -A Brief History of Time
I can't quite put my finger on the mistakes... I know they're there, but I don't know how to change them. Oh well. It's readable, at least.
------------------ Sundered Angel , The One and Only
Ares Webboard Moderator, and all-around Nice Guy
I think I've figured out how the kid writes these stories:
------------------ "Let's do this!" -Styth Titan A.E.
No I don't, and I take that as an insult. Besides, this is my first try at writing a short story. All my other ones were at the bare minimum 40+ pages long.
------------------ To Escape Velocity: Nova and Beyond! -------------- Millennium. Its coming, prepare for it. Coming to the (url="http://"http://www.ambrosiaSW.com/games/ev/chronicles.html")EV Chronicles(/url).