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"Let's hurry! We dont have much time!" The Hinwar warriors raced across the desert.
"We'll never make it!" The Hinwar ran up the Voyager's ramp.
"Is that everyone? Good." The leader raced into the ship last and his crew took off.
"Sir, enemy ships on the starboard side."
"Blast them!" The ships crew went to the guns, leaving Grivoliko Consariton alone at the deck. The shields were at 50%. 35%. 10%. The last Vonian ships, a group of Interceptors, hung along the side of thee ship. 5%. 1%. The sirens went off as the shield were destroyed.
"One left."
"I got him!" The last interceptor was destroyed.
"Good job guys, but where do we go no--"
"More ship coming in!"
"I dont care just go!" The beaton and battered Vonian frigate jumped into hyperspace and was gone.
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Well.... That was an OK story but it was really short. It was really short and didn't have much detail.
Keep on trying!
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I wrote this when I was a complete newbie, look at the date.
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Holy Crap!!! The Chronicle guys need to get a move on!!!
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Originally posted by Overrider720: **Holy Crap!!! The Chronicle guys need to get a move on!!! **
They are. EVula's posting stories three times a week. The current backlog will be pretty much clear by the end of December.
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Originally posted by Phil Barron: **They are. EVula's posting stories three times a week. The current backlog will be pretty much clear by the end of December. **
Oh that's good. Thanks
you know what I just realized, it's part 1. Not much of a cliff hanger
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