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The UE's Dread (That's the title not "this is the discovery of the dreadnought)
Chapter 1- Introduction
The Voinian War is at its peak, there is no ultimate war but new technolagy has come from both sides to help crush the other. The UE-Emalgha Offensive has lowered the productivity of the Voinians after losing Avann and Romit and the Hinwar's small yet devistating fight for freedom lost the Voinians Gualon, Gamur, and Obron.
But even though the UE have taken an advantage the Voinians still have one station high up in their territory. One that is on the verge of creating the deadliest, most powerful, most massive warship in the Universe. The UE have only one idea that could save them. For now the UE have time but that time is limited......
Chapter 2- Scoutship Green
"George we're far into Voinian Space, we've been lucky enough not to run into any ships, but how much longer until they realize we're spying on them?" my First Mate Charlie said.
"Just one more jump north then we'll head back," I said as I set up the ship for the final jump north. the force of the jump sent me flying into the back of my seat and as soon as it started it was done. Scoutship Green flew into the system. "Well, the map says it's a Voinian system called Isled," i stated. The view screen came up and Charlie and I saw the most massive ship ever. it looked just like a triangle only thicker. I flipped on the targeting menu, and it said Voinian Prototye. "Prototype of what!" I exclaimed as I scanned the ship.
"We gotta get out of here!" Charle yelled. "6 Neutron Turrets, 8 Rocket Turrets that launch 3 at a time. and 20 Voinian Interceptors!"
I started to pilot the ship away but the voinians found us and moved in for the kill.
"At least the thing is slow," I pointed out. The ship opened fire. 3 powerful rockets shot out of the point of the triangle and 2 smashed into Scoutship Green.
"Shields down to 9%!" I exclaimed "We have to get out of here!" I piloted the ship to Hyperspace point and slammed my fist on top of the Hyper Space Button and immediatly shot into the jump and went through as many systems as we could. We shot into the DSN-9418 system with no fuel left.
"No! one more system and we could have had help, but noooo! we're stuck here!" I shouted. Our ship shook as a rocket smashed into are hull . The male voice of the systems sprung to life
"Warning. Sheilds down to 17%. Weapons are off line." the voice calmly explained. I flipped on the view screen and saw 3 Cruisers pursuing us.
"We've got to get out of here! Now!" I shouted. "Charlie start diverting fuel from the wepons to the engines!" I ordered. A pack of Heavy Fighters swarmed us.
BOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!! A rocket collided with the ship sending it careening towards the planet F-9056. My scoutship collided with the dry, hard surface of the uninhabited planet, knocking me out.
I woke up a few minutes later and climbed out of the cockpit of the flaming wreck. I had many cuts all over my body and Charlie didn't budge.
"Charlie! Charlie!" I yelled. It was no use though. Charlie was dead. I was stranded on the planet and the Voinians knew it. I held information that could mean the end of the Voinain Empire. I tried to rest through the night, but it's hard to sleep knowing that the Voinians would be coming after me.
To Be Continued...........
=============================== Thank you so much Jive320! I kind of wrote it the same way you write yours!
--------Overrider720
(edited for grammer mistakes and such, i'm sure you know.)
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Ermm, the writing style could use some work. It sounds way too scripted, too B-movie like. Try visiting different fanfic sites such as the one in my sig to find out how to write the stories better.
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It's here it's here!!!!!!!!!
I realized that spl. Wait until chapter 3 part 1. It is wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better.
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I'm honored that you modeled the story after mine Thanks
Good job, and keep writing!
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