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Excellent story so far. However, you seem to be trying to focus on way to many characters. It's a little hard keeping track of whose who.
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Great work! Good job! I like the story!
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to keep your suggestions in mind while writing the newer chapters.
Great story!
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