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(Posted on 12-05-2000)
Admiral Ramsey Kafoury walked down the central corridor of the brand new UE Cruiser under his command, the UES Red Death. It had been completed at the Tokyo shipyards only a month before, and its engines still squeaked like they did during the maiden flight from Tokyo to the orbital base. Every new facet of the ship he sawand there were plenty of thoseKafoury was amazed at Anna Balashovas genius.
This, thought Kafoury as he inspected the ships brilliant wall and matching crew, is the most powerful ship in the universe.
Kafourys battle group, easily the largest in the UE fleet, consisted of the UES Red Death, the flagship of the fleet, three UE Carriers, eight UE Destroyers, a full squadron of UE Fighters, not counting the ones in the ships holds, and a small group of warships and fighters on loan from the Emalgha. In addition, he had found a few small-time traders to accompany him at the UE frontier outposts. These included a few scoutships and an Arada, practically useless against the Voinians thick armor. The United Earth Fifth Defense Fleet was assigned to patrol duty on the Voinian frontier to watch for Voinian incursions towards UE space. Its job so far had been very boring; after the invasion of Krotun, an important source of shipbuilding metals had been lost to the Voinians. They did not have the materiel to create many more new warships to challenge the UE dominance over the eastern sector of what had been Voinian space, according to UE spy reports. But today they would prove to be wrong.
Admiral Kafoury was a stickler for order. Every thirty minutes, he patched a call through to the whole fleet checking whether everyone was there. Although it seemed to be a needless precaution to many of his men, he knew it was necessary. The scoutship pilots had a habit of jumping out of system to alleviate their boredom and to show off their fuel capacity and fuel scoops. Often, they simply left for good. One scoutship had been AWOL for three days already, and Kafoury had no idea where it was. His underlingsalmost all fresh officers newly brought in from the UE naval academy to combat the lack of officers after the disastrous victory at Avannthought that their fleet could handle anything. Kafoury knew, though, that every single ship was important, if only to carry back information about the fleets destructionalthough he hoped it would never come to that.
As suddenly as it had left, the missing scoutship, the Journeyman, piloted by some mercenary named Dash Riprock jumped back in-system.
As soon as he was able, Dash started to blabber incoherently: Voinian attack dreadnought kill offensive barely survived.
It took Admiral Kafoury a few seconds to reason it out, and even then he wasnt sure if Riprock could be trusted. Nevertheless, the admiral immediately declared Red Alert on all ships. Suddenly, a large fleet came in from the galactic west. Riprocks scoutship, which had just jumped in from that direction, was immediately ripped to shreds by neutron turrets from the flagship of the Voinian fleet a shiny new dreadnought.
The Voinian battle groupwhich broadcast itself as the Central Voinian Defense Fleetwas enormous. At the head were two dreadnoughts, the flagship and another one behind it. Several cruisers and many more frigates backed up the lead ships, and almost immediately dozens of heavy fighters and interceptors poured out of bays and hyperspace. First Officer Logray didnt have to voice his opinion. He did, anyway, with a long string of profanity. The admiral simply nodded.
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Very, very nice man. Two thumbs up!
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Thanks, Catacomb. Next installment should be appearing in a few months...
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Cool. I like it.
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Excellent! Destruction of the Voinians! AWESOME!!!
God bless,
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Originally posted by shayborg: **Next installment should be appearing in a few months...
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Months!
Originally posted by The Catacomb: **Months! **
That's what he said...
By "a few months", I mean I'll submit it within a month and a half or so, and it will appear about a month after that. And another thing...its title will be "Retribution (formerly DOTV): Part 2". The plot is based on that of the Retribution plug I'm working on. (Official web site: (url="http://"http://www.andrew.cmu.edu/user/dsghosh/evosite/retribution.html")http://www.andrew.cm...etribution.html(/url) ).
Awesome story Shayborg!
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Best E.V. Story I've read
Originally posted by Warden Dios: Best E.V. Story I've read
notes that it's an EV Override story, but says nothing
Heh. Really nice story, again.
Now that's always nice to hear, even though it is for EVO. Thanks a lot, Warden. One is glad to be called the best.
A really good story! I'm not trying to be mean, but I was wondering where the Vonians got the metal to build TWO dreadnoughts and the rest of that massive fleet if they had lost an important metal producing planet?
Nice shayborg! Hows the plug-in coming? Need any help?
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Originally posted by ibrow: A really good story! I'm not trying to be mean, but I was wondering where the Vonians got the metal to build TWO dreadnoughts and the rest of that massive fleet if they had lost an important metal producing planet?
Not metal. Fuel. If you read Niot's description you will see that.
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Originally posted by Lonevoinian: Not metal. Fuel. If you read Niot's description you will see that.
You mean Latwit, of course.
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(quote)Originally posted by Bubaganoosh: **Nice shayborg! Hows the plug-in coming? Need any help?:mad:
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Um, that's a fairly decent story. The material is a bit unorigional, but hey, it's based off a game. Nice work.
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GREAT STORY MAN!! - Can't wait to see the rest. And by the way, the ending was especially funny! - "STRING OF PROFANITY"!! LOL!!! If you have the time, check out my story, probably not as flashy but it should be O.K.. I have just submitted it, so hopefully it'll pass the editors at ambrosia- look for its soon. its Called "Death From Above". later man -keep it real