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I already posted this on the Banter & Brawl board, but I figured I should post it here, too, as this is where all the EVO players go...
A while ago, on the Banter & Brawl forum, I asked for people to proof-read a story I was writing (the title was "the Omega Conspiracy"). Well, I ran it past them, and I'm pretty satisfied with it. I submitted the first six chapters to the EV/EVO Chronicles, but, because of the backlog, the story will probably not appear for a few months.
If you are interested in reading the story before it appears on the Chronicles forum, please go to the following URL: (url="http://"http://www.angelfire.com/ma3/skyblade/omega_conspiracy/")http://www.angelfire...ega_conspiracy/(/url) , and read and enjoy the first seven chapters that I have written (and take the poll to tell me what you think of my story ;)). Any comments can be written when you take the poll, but I'd appreciate some feedback on the webboard, so you can post them here, too.
The rest of Part I (about five more chapters) will be posted soon.
That's about it. Thanks for your time. Hope you enjoy the story.
(url="http://"http://www.angelfire.com/ma3/skyblade/omega_conspiracy/")The Omega Conspiracy(/url)
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(This message has been edited by skyblade (edited 01-16-2001).)
Great story! Excellent writing!
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Originally posted by Captain Carnotaur: **Great story! Excellent writing! **
Thanks.
When will the next chapter come out?
Originally posted by Captain Carnotaur: **When will the next chapter come out? **
I'm not sure. I have to plan them out a little better (I have everything planned out in an outline already), and then actually write them. I expect that the next chapter will be up by Saturday, maybe earlier.
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Angelfire gave me a bunch of crap with the images... It would just become 'Image Hosted by Angelfire' as opposed to the image I wanted. I moved everything over to my Geocities site and did a little tweaking. Sorry for any inconveniences.
(url="http://"http://www.geocities.com/skyblade500/omega_conspiracy/index.html")http://www.geocities...racy/index.html(/url)
When will Chapter 9 of Part 1 come out? I don't want to read Part 2 until I finish reading Part 1.
great job, that's a great story,I'm looking forward for more
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Originally posted by Captain Carnotaur: **When will Chapter 9 of Part 1 come out? I don't want to read Part 2 until I finish reading Part 1. **
Of course it will. I'm actually working on it right now.
Originally posted by Captain Orne: **great job, that's a great story,I'm looking forward for more **
There's a lot more to come, too.
Chapter 9 is up. (url="http://"http://www.geocities.com/skyblade500/omega_conspiracy/part1/chap9.html")http://www.geocities...art1/chap9.html(/url)
Tell me what you think of it.
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