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GEESE II IS ON ITS WAY! I finally finished writng it, and it will pry be on the chronicles page in a few weeks. At the request of your posts I made the action sequences longer, but the story is infitely more sad so beware.
------------------ Man have pity on man
Maybe this time I might feel sad for whoever dies or gets injured...
Hey, it might open me up.
------------------ Unified Space Intelligence www.usi-rpg.com Tell them Derek Pitt sent you.
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Originally posted by Jas86: **GEESE II IS ON ITS WAY! I finally finished writng it, and it will pry be on the chronicles page in a few weeks. At the request of your posts I made the action sequences longer, but the story is infitely more sad so beware.
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Great, I can't wait.
------------------ A life??? Ooo thats a new plug-in right? "Borb II of V.S.S Hellfire."
I liked your story as well. I think that it could even be a great start of a much larger and longer story overall. Maybe a short history of Wild Geese heroes and conflicts? Defianetly start work on a real juicy short story though. This one was just a little too short to really get into
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Have faith. I won't stop until I'm forced to, or an untimely death.
Thanks for your advice.
It made me cry and Im a 20 yr old male. But Im very much in tune with human emotion and imagination so I can literally feel what is being written if the words are good enough.... I guess I just see what 'Sarah' would have really felt cuz I see that alot...
I loved the story... It was really good. Kept me reading.... keep it up...
------------------ Yeah, I'm crazy. Really crazy. But, Im the nicest crazy guy you'll ever meet.
Just for the record, the Irish don't play the bagpipes, rather they play an amusing dual-armpit based cousin, the Uilleann pipes, which use a bellows for air, rather than the pipers breath... Otherwise, a good story, but watch the punctuation and grammer.
Why do people care about the technical details so miniscule that no one else before them even realized they existed?
People should really pay more attention to what the story is trying to say, rather than the words that are actually spoken.